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Obsidia
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So this is a story that has been in my head for a while now (but I'm still thinking it through) and I just thought I'd share it with you all. c: But you're probably wondering, "What is this 'Obsidia'?" Well, erm... just look below. (And yes I made it up.)
Obsidia is a land in another dimension where the codes of predator and prey are reversed. Predator becomes prey and prey becomes predator. The same species on Earth are found here, but there are some of those "aliens" or "rare species". Some species on Earth might find the rare portal that appears every one thousand years, and every animal has had the urge to go in. Most of those animals can now talk to other species in perfect translation, while very few don't. Some of those species can turn into something else, like a mutant. But that is very rare. But there is one exception...
Current Characters.
Name: Maui
Gender: female
Species: An extremely mutated fennec fox
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Name: Azalea
Gender: female
Species: Mutant deer (basically a female deer with big horns. =P)
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Name: Airan
Gender: female
Species: Mutated arctic wolf (though it doesn't look like it)
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Name: Acaer
Gender: male
Species: Normal arctic wolf
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Name: Reuben
Gender: male
Species: Timber wolf hybrid, he is the size of a full grown donkey
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Name: Bur
Gender: female but with a male voice
Species: Dire wolf with a bit of Eastern timber-wolf
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Currently WIP.
So this is a story that has been in my head for a while now (but I'm still thinking it through) and I just thought I'd share it with you all. c: But you're probably wondering, "What is this 'Obsidia'?" Well, erm... just look below. (And yes I made it up.)
Obsidia is a land in another dimension where the codes of predator and prey are reversed. Predator becomes prey and prey becomes predator. The same species on Earth are found here, but there are some of those "aliens" or "rare species". Some species on Earth might find the rare portal that appears every one thousand years, and every animal has had the urge to go in. Most of those animals can now talk to other species in perfect translation, while very few don't. Some of those species can turn into something else, like a mutant. But that is very rare. But there is one exception...
Current Characters.
Name: Maui
Gender: female
Species: An extremely mutated fennec fox
Reference:
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Name: Azalea
Gender: female
Species: Mutant deer (basically a female deer with big horns. =P)
Reference:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Name: Airan
Gender: female
Species: Mutated arctic wolf (though it doesn't look like it)
Reference:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Name: Acaer
Gender: male
Species: Normal arctic wolf
Reference: (View it fullsize)
[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Name: Reuben
Gender: male
Species: Timber wolf hybrid, he is the size of a full grown donkey
Reference:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
Name: Bur
Gender: female but with a male voice
Species: Dire wolf with a bit of Eastern timber-wolf
Reference:
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Currently WIP.
Last edited by Artemis on Fri May 10, 2013 6:03 pm; edited 7 times in total
Re: Obsidia
Chapter Three - Airan
The creature walked towards me. I held my breath. I looked up at the creature... it was so much bigger than I am. I gulped, waiting for this thing to take the first action.
"Hello, Miss Fennec Fox," it said.
I laid my ears back. Did it just talk to me? What kind of predator it this thing?
"Um, hello," I gulped again, "not to be rude, but I'm Maui." My voice was full of fear.
The creature smiled. "Well then hello, Maui, my name's Airan, Lead Scout of the Kazerian Pack. What brings you here to our fine territory?"
I gulped again. "Erm... I'm sorry. I was just passing through." I looked around, then back at Airan. "This is my home, but it burned down... I don't know how long ago. I'm in search of my mother, but seems like there's no sign of her."
Airan's eyes widened. She opened her mouth to free a slight wince, then laid her ears flat.
"What is it?" I asked, concerned.
"I cannot tell you."
"But why...? Is Mother ok?!" I asked, not horrified.
"It is beyond that," Aira said.
"Well what?"
"I... said that already. I cannot tell you."
"Is there anyone who can tell me, then?" I asked, starting to get annoyed. What was the big deal of telling someone something?
"Y-Yes. There is. The Kazerian Mage. He knows this kind of stuff... I'm just simply not allowed to speak of it unless I have a special marking on my fur."
I sighed; this is getting nowhere. I decided to just cut it to the chase. "Bring me to him."
The creature walked towards me. I held my breath. I looked up at the creature... it was so much bigger than I am. I gulped, waiting for this thing to take the first action.
"Hello, Miss Fennec Fox," it said.
I laid my ears back. Did it just talk to me? What kind of predator it this thing?
"Um, hello," I gulped again, "not to be rude, but I'm Maui." My voice was full of fear.
The creature smiled. "Well then hello, Maui, my name's Airan, Lead Scout of the Kazerian Pack. What brings you here to our fine territory?"
I gulped again. "Erm... I'm sorry. I was just passing through." I looked around, then back at Airan. "This is my home, but it burned down... I don't know how long ago. I'm in search of my mother, but seems like there's no sign of her."
Airan's eyes widened. She opened her mouth to free a slight wince, then laid her ears flat.
"What is it?" I asked, concerned.
"I cannot tell you."
"But why...? Is Mother ok?!" I asked, not horrified.
"It is beyond that," Aira said.
"Well what?"
"I... said that already. I cannot tell you."
"Is there anyone who can tell me, then?" I asked, starting to get annoyed. What was the big deal of telling someone something?
"Y-Yes. There is. The Kazerian Mage. He knows this kind of stuff... I'm just simply not allowed to speak of it unless I have a special marking on my fur."
I sighed; this is getting nowhere. I decided to just cut it to the chase. "Bring me to him."
Re: Obsidia
Great chapter :DD I wander what he cant tell her....Anyways, here is an idea for a character, its just one of my characters from another pack but you can use em if you want. (I made up the part about his hybrid )
Name | Reuben
Gender | Male
Species | Timber wolf hybrid, he is the size of a full grown donkey
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Name | Reuben
Gender | Male
Species | Timber wolf hybrid, he is the size of a full grown donkey
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Renegade- Posts : 25
Scales : 27
Join date : 2013-05-06
Age : 24
Re: Obsidia
I think your going to need a elder (I love elder characters for some reason XD)
Name : Bur
Gender : Female but with a male's voice
Species : Dire wolf with a bit of eastern timber wolf
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(I would give you it in image but it's a big picture)
Name : Bur
Gender : Female but with a male's voice
Species : Dire wolf with a bit of eastern timber wolf
Reference :
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(I would give you it in image but it's a big picture)
Re: Obsidia
Oh wow, I like how the book is coming along! I, too, have a character you could use(predator since you only have one ).
Re: Obsidia
Lol thanks for the support! And thanks for the character Forgotten Soul; really appreciated! And for now characters will not be accepted.
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