Obsidia

[Artemis]

So this is a story that has been in my head for a while now (but I'm still thinking it through) and I just thought I'd share it with you all. c: But you're probably wondering, "What is this 'Obsidia'?" Well, erm... just look below. (And yes I made it up.)

Obsidia is a land in another dimension where the codes of predator and prey are reversed. Predator becomes prey and prey becomes predator. The same species on Earth are found here, but there are some of those "aliens" or "rare species". Some species on Earth might find the rare portal that appears every one thousand years, and every animal has had the urge to go in. Most of those animals can now talk to other species in perfect translation, while very few don't. Some of those species can turn into something else, like a mutant. But that is very rare. But there is one exception...

Current Characters.

Name: Maui
Gender: female
Species: An extremely mutated fennec fox
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Name: Azalea
Gender: female
Species: Mutant deer (basically a female deer with big horns. =P)
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Name: Airan
Gender: female
Species: Mutated arctic wolf (though it doesn't look like it)
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Name: Acaer
Gender: male
Species: Normal arctic wolf
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Name: Reuben
Gender: male
Species: Timber wolf hybrid, he is the size of a full grown donkey
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Name: Bur
Gender: female but with a male voice
Species: Dire wolf with a bit of Eastern timber-wolf
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Currently WIP.

[Laurence]

Seems legit, the first(and only character so far) is very cute to me... XD

[Artemis]

Lol well thank you! ^^

[Radar]

I like the theme that this book has planned out ^.^ I hope you set to work on writing this because I am sure it will be a humungus(FAIL on spelling) success

[Artemis]

Thanks, and I am in need of characters, so please if anyone has any out there please post here. =P

[Breeze]

OOH it so CUTE!
Name: You mean species name? Or the name for like a pet?
Gender: Femme
Species:Mutant changing one, used to be an artic wolf.
Reference: IT WON'T WORK!! WHY GOOGLE?! WHY!!!!

[Artemis]

OOH it so CUTE!
Name: You mean species name? Or the name for like a pet?
Gender: Femme
Species:Mutant changing one, used to be an artic wolf.
Reference: IT WON'T WORK!! WHY GOOGLE?! WHY!!!!

Like, a name for the character. And give me the link to the image instead of posting the picture on here if it doesn't work. =P

[Artemis]

Chapter One - The End Of the World

My worst nightmare came true a few days ago. It was the worst.
Fires broke out on the Australian coast, in a field of tall grass. But it was odd, because it wasn't the right season; this was usually normal in the dry season but it's in the middle of the wet season. Odd. I wriggled my large ears and the short whiskers on my face as the fires came closer to me and my siblings. The reflections of the fire could be see clearly in my eyes. I didn't move. I didn't try to run. All I did was look at my fluffy golden-brown tail then back at the fire. I didn't try to run or hide. That's because there was no point to. I was meant to die.
I felt my scruff being picked up. I let it. As it began to run, I looked up at the creature. It was only my mother. I sighed in relief. I dangled back and forth from her mouth, and I tried to breathe normally in the thick smoke. I sneezed and my breathing became faster. I didn't know what the point of this was. Well, at least I die with the one who I love most, I thought. I closed my eyes, giving Mother Nature the chance to take my life. But she didn't. I opened my eyes again and looked in the direction my mother was running. No wonder Mother Nature didn't take my life; it was the edge of the Earth right there. At the very edge, my mother stopped. She looked down. All I could see was a blurry image or vast blue. It was pretty, and peaceful. It drew me near. I struggled to escape my mother's tight jaws. But she didn't let me go. I sighed and looked back at the Vast Blue. So beautiful and so peaceful, yet I was stuck up here, on this burning waste-land. My mother looked behind us, and I saw what she saw. The fire in pursuit. My mother looked back down directly below us. It was so far... how do we get down there? I wondered. I laid my ears down. I was so tired already. I'm tired! I whined, looking up at her. She gave me a grunt as a response, which I'm pretty sure I translated correctly. You can't sleep now. I sighed, and looked down at my small toes. I just wanted to dream so bad, to get this living nightmare away from me. I closed my eyes. About a second later, I felt a strong wind in my face. I opened my eyes. The Vast Blue was getting closer! I yipped with joy, but that was instantly followed by a yelp and the freedom or my scruff. I looked at my mom. Her hind leg was twisted backwards, and I'm assuming that she must have hit it on that naughty Earth and broken it. And her yelp must have made her let go of her grip. She tried to grab me again, and that's when we hit the water. She didn't get me, but soon I looked up at her. She was having trouble keeping her head above the water with that dead weight of a leg. But she managed to. I don't know what, but the light from the surface was fading. I closed my eyes and awaited my fate -- death.

[Laurence]

Nice story Art! It makes me think of my mother for some reason. ._.

[Radar]

Wow, it looks amazing Artemis! Excited to see the following chapter and see what happens (though it did scare me when the mom broke her leg and was in the water, I hope she doesnt die ) Anyways, lookin good ^^

[Artemis]

Thanks you two! (I honestly dunno what to do with Maui's mother, but all I know is that she most likely won't appear in the rest of the story.)

[Laurence]

(Maybe she gets separated from Maui in some earthquake thing where the ground cracks or something?) No problem

(Happy 1001 posts on the site, guys!)

[Artemis]

(No her mother doesn't get to Obsidia, unfortunately, because she didn't go where Maui ended up.)

(And lawl thanks.)

[Renegade]

Wow, this is looking like an absolutely AWESOME book, Artemis! I am sure I would buy it if it was in the stores, but lucky for me, I can read it for FREE
(And yay for awesomness posters!)

[Artemis]

Lmao Ren, and thanks!

[Renegade]

No problemo, just sharing my amazing opinion to the cyber world of millions of pixels out there.

[Artemis]

Lol, but thanks! ^^

[Breeze]

XD this is looking really good, Art! Ah, quick question, what species are they? Is they dingos? 0.o

[Artemis]

They are fennec foxes. ^^

[Artemis]

Chapter Two - New World

I was alive. I could feel it. I tried to open my eyes, but all I could see was a tiny yellowish mineral blocking my view and stinging my eyes. I let out a small yelp at my burning eyes and ran around. I ran, and suddenly some sort of liquid splashed into my eyes, taking all the sand out. I shook my head, and looked around. It was the Vast Blue! I was in the Vast Blue! I couldn't believe it. I yipped around with joy until suddenly I saw the beach, and the land behind it. But I don't understand... how did I survive? I thought for sure I had drowned. I looked at all my surroundings, and saw the cliff. I guess I had simply washed ashore when my eyes were closed. I sighed. I hoped Mother was all right, especially after breaking her leg. And I really hoped the fire was out. That was the worst. I walking out onto the beach, and sniffed around. Although it looked the same, it smelled odd. Like a new place. I walked back right to sea level, and looked down at my reflection. I tilted my head. Wasn't I golden-brown? I wondered. Now I'm some bluish-greenish color, with dark green stripes. My eyes were pure white. Weird. I didn't know what was going on, or where I was. Or maybe I was dead. I couldn't tell. But then I reminded myself that since I have a body, I'm still alive. I shrugged. My new pelt color didn't matter right now. All that mattered was that I needed to get home. To see my mother again. That was my last and final wish. I looked around once more, and trotted off into the forest. I headed towards the cliff. It was strange, because I didn't feel like I needed Mother's milk to survive. And I was no longer tired. How long was I out for?
When I finally got to high elevations, I was surprised. Wasn't the tall grass supposed to be gone, and the land in black? This was weird. Really weird. Instead, I saw fluffy white stuff. I put my paw in it. It was fluffy, and very, very cold. I put my nose in it and sniffed. Smelled like... nothing. I put my nose in the air. There was a crisp, cold smell to the air. But I wasn't used to it. I wasn't used to it at all.
My stomach growled. I was hungry already. I sniffed around, and fed on some fresh green grass. Wait, grass? Why was I eating grass? I didn't know... but it was good. And the taste of meat now seemed awful. I shook my head, erasing the thought. What was this place?
A nearby twig snapped. I shook. It's probably a predator of some sort. I wanted to run, but something told me to stay put. I looked around, my ears catching the slightest sound of movement. There, I saw it. Some kind of canine, with a thick fluffy coat. It's pelt was as white as snow. It stopped, knowing I has spotted it. There I was, in locked eyes with the creature.

[Breeze]

WOW, cool! That last part is kinda intense.... XD

[Laurence]

I lost it at grass, I found that really funny XD
Great chapter BTW!

And lol, it's me! JK XD

[Artemis]

Thank you both! ^^

[Renegade]

An amazing story, the second chapter was extremely fast paced and well written! Excited to see the upcoming chapters and to see what happens next...

[Artemis]

And I can't wait to write them! xD =P

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